You have mere seconds to capture the attention of a visitor to your website, blog, landing page, sales page… or any page for that matter.
One of the single most powerful tools you have to accomplish this task is your headline.
There are several keys to a compelling, and selling, headline and a few tips to help you get the job done.
1. Tap into Your Prospects’ Emotions
According to psychologists our buying decisions are based on our emotions. Use headlines that offer your readers a strong emotional benefit or reaction.
Emotions you can tap into are a desire to feel:
- Attractive, Sexy
- Smart, Confident, In control
- Energetic, Fit
- Pampered
- A sense of belonging, connected
- Wealthy, Financially Free
- Respected, Proud
- Safe, Secure
2. Make it Active
To compel it’s important to use active language – language that shows movement and commands attention.
For example, “Stop Spending So Much On PPC,” is an okay headline but it doesn’t command action nor does it tap into emotions. However, “Stop Draining Your Wallet on PPC” is much better. Stop Draining Your Wallet is a much more active and emotionally powerful phrase. Readers will relate on a more personal level.
3. Let Your Reader Know They’re Important
The word YOU is a very powerful word. It let’s your reader’s feel as if you’re talking to them specifically and interested in solving their problems, issues and helping them achieve their desires. Instead of using I, Me or We in your headlines, use You. Using the headline example above compare the two options
“Stop Spending So Much On PPC.”
“Stop Draining Your Wallet on PPC.”
People want to know what’s in it for them and when they can assess that information in the headline, they’re going to be compelled to continue reading your copy and making a purchase.
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Three Simple Steps to Write Headlines That Sell
So now you have some ideas about what types of headlines sell, how do you begin to write those powerful headlines?
Step One: Get to know your audience intimately. What are their hopes, dreams, desires, and problems? Understanding your audience will help you create an emotional and powerful headline directed specifically at your audience.
Step Two: Determine how your products or services are going to make your prospects’ lives better or solve their problems. For example, if you sell ebooks on Healthy Choices for Diabetics and your audience struggles with diabetes, create a headline that highlights a specific benefit your ebook offers, such as lowering blood sugar without giving up taste, and solve their problems.
Step Three: Write ten to twenty (or more) possible headlines. Not only will this give you practice writing compelling headlines, it’ll help you hone in on that perfect headline. And if you think you have a few winners you can always test them for conversion rates to find out which headline is more effective. The ones that didn’t quite make the grade might be perfect as sub-heads or bullets!
Marketing and copywriting experts consider your headline to be the most import element of any effective marketing piece. Take the time to craft a compelling, and selling, headline and you’ll reap the benefits for years to come.
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Twitter: JWean
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Headlines have always been one of the hardest things for me. And one that I am unfortunately not very good at. I also don’t spend a lot of time on it.
I agree that a title is important if someone just stubmles upon your website, or is reading a bunch of blog from an RSS reader. However, if they are searching google, I think you get the benefit of the doubt if you come up high in the search rankings.
Thanks for breaking it down
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Twitter: Yourinda
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Hi Deb,
thank you so much on the great guidance/tips on how to write headlines. I like your examples on the emotions.
I learned a lot and will consider it in the future.
Cheers
Yorinda
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Hi Deb,
These are some great steps to getting your headline perfect. It takes a bit of practice and testing what works and what doesn’t but I agree, if you get your headline right you’ll reap the benefits.
Cheers,
Lynn
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Twitter: melaniekissell
says:
Bravo, Deb!
You’ve covered soup to nuts about crafting attention-grabbing headlines. And I really enjoyed the follow up piece to your post that Lisbeth Tanz did on her blog. You absolutely deserve kudos on the presentation of this topic.
First impressions are made via your headlines and if you don’t make one that’s compelling, memorable, or noteworthy, you may never see that visitor again!
Although I really enjoy the process, I always feel like the “pressure is on” when I’m crafting my headlines. I guess it’s because I realize that, ultimately, I’ve got to come up with the right words that will entice my target audience to read on.
Exemplary post!
Melanie
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